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Wow!!! This was a phenomenal chapter, I think it's the best one yet. I'm a sucker for high emotional stakes.

I really liked the twist on the Suravi fight! I was so prepared for an epic battle, but I like the direction you went into. A nice, unexpected surprise. :) But I will say, the surprise at the end got me a little because I was starting to like Hutch and his outside the box thinking...that shared look with Alex though beforehand gave me a feeling.

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